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IF ASKED TO DESCRIBE HER

31 May

 

I will tell them she’s the ninth time I tried to learn how to swim. I will tell them she’s the salt in the sea that gives it taste. She is the sea. I will tell them she is asthma attacks. I will tell them she is a purring cat.I will tell them she never fails to roar and it is terrifying. I will tell them she is hope in a broken promise. I will tell them sugar is still sugar even when it is brown. I will tell them I have seen reason in love not being a finished product. It is a home constantly undergoing construction. I would tell them I am everywhere except apart from her.

 
5 Comments

Posted by on May 31, 2018 in Poems

 

5 responses to “IF ASKED TO DESCRIBE HER

  1. Noamesi

    May 31, 2018 at 8:32 am

    Haaahaaaa
    This brings back the words of old(fond memories).this words thats u have to rehearse repeatedly b4 approaching her.
    Keep doing the good work and may the good lord increase ur talent and writting skills

     
  2. Redeem

    May 31, 2018 at 8:40 am

    That’s a nice write up, I love the description, it carried my mind’s away.

     
  3. Kukua

    May 31, 2018 at 5:33 pm

    Nice piece. Poets have a nice way with words 👍🏽

     
  4. Lucas

    May 31, 2018 at 9:15 pm

    Great piece as usual

     
  5. Henry

    May 31, 2018 at 9:27 pm

    Nice piece

     

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